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FFR Livingroom by AlexCom
by AlexCom

Fantastic, high quality render!!! Technically I can't put my finger on anything that is wrong with the scene. The modeling / materials ...

Heretic Composite Bow Arrows closeup by Samouel
by Samouel

A nice addition to to the theme. As always a beautiful render and continuation of the concept. The materials look great, really get a s...

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FFR Livingroom by AlexCom
Fantastic, high quality render!!! Technically I can't put my finger on anything that is wrong with the scene. The modeling / materials / lighting are all very well crafted. However, i think the scene does lack a sense of composition in the frame. Not necessarily the objects and furniture themselves, but the camera angle. I find my eye drawn to the middle of the shot and all the interesting pieces are small and farther back in frame. There needs something to draw the eye diagonally across the view and through the depth of the image. We see just the edge of the window on the left that is pouring in this beautiful light, maybe rotating to see some of that would give more dynamic to the shot.

Personally I love the small windows and the big red wall, but I would loose the red on the wall to the right with the fireplace / wood logs. Maybe some material change in there would help break it up? Just a personal suggestion.

All in all excellent craft, look forward to seeing more
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Matthew J. Sama
United States
Assistant Art Directors for film and television - NYC based
Current Projects include:

The Blacklist
The Amazing Spiderman II
NOAH
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AlexCom Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Thank you for the critique! Very much appreciated!
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cain3D Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thanks for the fav, digging your chair render
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mrGroup-Admin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
Welcome to #mental-ray group! :thumbsup:
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Sama-mj Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
thanks!
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mrGroup-Admin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
Good Luck!
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